
Friends
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This poem shares about how true friends act toward each others.
F - Faithful and Forever together.
R - Radiant, marked with love and happiness.
I - Inspiring and encouraging to take another step forward.
E - Empathetic and willing to help you.
N - Never wanting to let you go.
D - Dedicate attention and love to you.
S - So caring, kind, loving, compassionate and wonderful.

Mr Ajay Mehta

spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani

Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani

Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
D

Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D

magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
D

Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
D

Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani

spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
D

Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
D

Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
D

Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
D

Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing