Friendship Poem
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This poem is about friends, what real friendship means.
A friend hugs and shares.
A friend has fun with me.
A friend has danced in the rain with me. Drip Drop.
A friend doesn’t yell, nor do they hit.
A friend doesn’t ignore.
I know I can be a great friend, too.
I can be compassionate and supportive.
I can help and play with them.
I can make them feel special and comfortable.
A beautiful friendship is as pretty as a blooming flower.
A lasting friendship is as long as an ancient book.
A great friendship is a zooming roller coaster.
A loyal friendship is a lock that can’t be released.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing