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Gift of Christmas

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Avery Li

11

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The gift of Christmas is wrapped in happiness
It looks like ecstatic smiles spread across friend’s and family’s faces
Radiant, vivid, colorful decor gleams with brilliance
Stunning presents sparkle with elated joy

The gift of Christmas is wrapped in jubilance
It sounds like cheerful, delighted laughter
Sheets of luminous snow falls from the sky
Silver snowflakes dance and smile at me as they fall

The gift of Christmas is wrapped in tranquility
The smell of sweet gingerbread glides across the room
The aroma of peppermint drifts through the air, filling my house with light
Delectable treats smell of a fresh, savory scent

The gift of Christmas is wrapped in warmth
The feel of warm hugs straps me in a bundle of joy
My comfy cozy clothes keep me warm
My dazzling Christmas tree gleams with lights as bright as the sun

Wrapped in happiness, jubilance, tranquility, and warmth
The gift of Christmas

average rating is 3 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

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Mr Ajay Mehta

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spring

Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.

Devika Udani

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Magnificent Friendship

Friendship is very important in life!

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Wonders of Nature

Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.

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Wonders of Nature

So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.

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magnificant friendship

So true about friendship. Well written.

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Nature's Beauties

How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.

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Friendship Poem

Well written about friendship and true at any age

Sarena Udani

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spring

My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”

I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!

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Friendship Poem

Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.

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Friendship Poem

I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.

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Friends

So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.

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Be You

So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing

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