I'm Free
By:
Age:
Ahaanya Bindal
9
This piece emphasizes a child's inherent respect for other living beings and reminds us that what we need to grow is love.
I’m a tree and this is how my story begins and ends. .
First, I started as a seed in a quiet tree farm.
I tried to grow up, but I could not.
I was different, but that was what I liked about me.
I stood still, but no one wanted me
until one day a girl finally picked me.
She planted me in the soil in her backyard,
and this is how my story began.
The bugs crawl up my branches,
the squirrels pass by,
as the years pass by, birds build nests in my branches.
I am loved.
Eventually I die,
and the girl is sad for me.
My last breath was peaceful.
The girl’s love for me was so big,
I came back to life.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing