I'm Free
By:
Age:
Ahaanya Bindal
9
This piece emphasizes a child's inherent respect for other living beings and reminds us that what we need to grow is love.
I’m a tree and this is how my story begins and ends. .
First, I started as a seed in a quiet tree farm.
I tried to grow up, but I could not.
I was different, but that was what I liked about me.
I stood still, but no one wanted me
until one day a girl finally picked me.
She planted me in the soil in her backyard,
and this is how my story began.
The bugs crawl up my branches,
the squirrels pass by,
as the years pass by, birds build nests in my branches.
I am loved.
Eventually I die,
and the girl is sad for me.
My last breath was peaceful.
The girl’s love for me was so big,
I came back to life.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.