
I Remembered
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This is a meaningful poem that shows how tight a friendship is.
I was in Kindergarten
I had a good friend.
She was kind, caring, funny, and wild.
We were together for 4 years.
It was until 4th grade, until we got the shock of our lives.
I was going to change schools.
No, this couldn't be. I thought.
She was my best friend.
We can not be separated.
The day before I had to leave,
My friend told me,
that we would always remember each other,
no matter what.
We made that promise, and then,
I had to leave.
My eyes, watered with hurt.
A few years later,
I was shopping with my family,
and had a new best friend with me.
she was also just as kind, caring, funny, and wild.
I stopped.
There was a girl with black silky hair and pure black eyes, looking at me.
Who was that? I wondered.
Suddenly, it hit me. It was my very best friend from that same school we went to together.
I thought we would be separated, forever.
From that day on, I got her contact,
hoping we wouldn't be separated again.

Mr Ajay Mehta

spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani

Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani

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Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
D

Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani

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My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing