Mom
By:
Age:
E-Hamster
12
Mom, thank you for teaching me all that I know today
Even though sometimes I might want to play
You would have me stay
You have taught me to be independent
And always encouraged me
Even to go for vice president
Thank you for teaching me how to cook
And clean the whole kitchen to sparkle
Even though I didn’t use the cookbook
And thank you for spending lots of your time with me
And cleaning my clothes
And also teaching me how to do laundry
Thank you for always playing “toys”
Because I was too young to have friends
And thank you for acting like one of my “boys”
Thank you for teaching me how to laugh
And how to be funny
And always helping me with my math
Throughout all our times together I will always love you, Mom
Even when we yell
I will always love you, Mom
When we fight and shout
I will always love you, Mom
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
D
Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D
magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
D
Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
D
Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
D
Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
D
Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
D
Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
D
Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing