Natures Magnificent Beauty
By:
Age:
Izach Pearson
10
It is a poem about a variety of things in nature from the wildlife to the plants. It shows how to appreciate nature for those who can't.
I am outside
I hear the birds chirping, chirp, chirp, chirp
They are singing a beautiful melody
The wind is whistling, blowing on the plants
Its singing is as beautiful as an ancient angel
I look at all the flowers and they all are quite unique
Some of the trees are 50 feet tall others only a couple yards
I see the tree which sways in a graceful pattern
The lush green shades on the trees give so much variety
When showing its breathtaking beauty in ways like it has a brain
The creatures are everywhere: ants, snails, birds.
There are so many it looks like there are a million
I can smell the flowers that are in the
Middle of a truly perfect bloom
Despite all the rough wind they still persevered
The dead leaves give off an unique smell
That only few specific people would enjoy
I imagine touching the flowers
Some would be rough but others smooth
The bushes have a whole basket of colors
The bark on the trees is softening and slowly falling off
This is nature's magnificent beauty
Poonam sharma
magnificant friendship
The simplicity of the poems and the deep care and love for relationships
Swati Mehta
spring
Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs
Bees eat the delicious nectar
off the flowers.
Love these lines. These lines so aptly describes the nature during spring time❤️❤️
Shashi Jaggia
spring
Takes the reader there to wonderful setting of a beautiful spring day with the shining sun, flowers, soft and delicate petals, the bees, the smell of spring!
Shashi Jaggia
spring
Nora touched all my senses with the sun, the flowers with the delightful smells, the cozy soft petals, the thunder! Very well written and takes the reader to the beautiful setting created by the poem.
Shashi Jaggia
Wonders of Nature
I can imagine the scene with the animals playing by the creek.
Amazing how she talks about saying goodbye to childhood being a child herself! Time does go by fast.
Shashi Jaggia
magnificant friendship
It is so true and from the heart. Friendship is like a seed!
Priya dua
magnificant friendship
I love this poem because by the end, I realize that she’s making a subtle but powerful connection between the animals she writes about and childhood. I first visualize animals playing but by the end I visualize children instead. It brings nostalgia to the reader and is very powerful!
Priya dua
magnificant friendship
What a powerful and perfect simile to compare friendship to a seed! Both are powerful and life affirming, and I love how the author uses the word “deep” both literally for a seed, and metaphorically for friendship. Very honest and powerful!
Priya dua
spring
A beautiful poem, because it transports the reader to that essence of spring, that we all know and love. I can see and smell all the sites. My favorite part is how she compares the petals of flowers to being cozy seats for bugs. Wonderful imagery and use of metaphors.
Priya Dua
spring
Beautiful imagery! A great poem because it transports the reader to that special essence of spring which everyone loves!
Priya Dua
spring
Beautiful imagery! I can see the sun and bees, and smell the flowers and spring smell. The best poem because it transports you emotionally. Wonderful!
Mr Ajay Mehta
magnificant friendship
Loved the line “Friendship is a seed “