Never Stop Trying
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
Never stop trying, don't give up.
when things get hard, get back up.
I trip and fall, my possibilities fade away.
I get back up, and don't let it ruin my day.
This is what life is all about,
When things get tough, don't sit and pout.
Instead, get up and shout,
"I'm never giving up, this is what life is about!"
Never stop trying, don't give up.
There is hope, if you look close up.
That things are looking up!
You will fly,
If you really try,
And get lifted up, into the sky.
You are not just a little pond fish,
You are really a shark, with your despair abolished
Look at the things that you can accomplish!
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D
magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing