Never Stop Trying
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
Never stop trying, don't give up.
when things get hard, get back up.
I trip and fall, my possibilities fade away.
I get back up, and don't let it ruin my day.
This is what life is all about,
When things get tough, don't sit and pout.
Instead, get up and shout,
"I'm never giving up, this is what life is about!"
Never stop trying, don't give up.
There is hope, if you look close up.
That things are looking up!
You will fly,
If you really try,
And get lifted up, into the sky.
You are not just a little pond fish,
You are really a shark, with your despair abolished
Look at the things that you can accomplish!
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.