
Periwinkle
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This is a poem about a color; periwinkle.
Periwinkle is a little girl dancing in the rain.
Periwinkle is lavender petals,
brushing against your skin softly.
Periwinkle is filled with peace and serenity.
Periwinkle blooms,
with strong friendship and love.
Periwinkle is a taste of happiness sinking into your tongue.
Periwinkle is the feeling of glory,
hugging you tight.
Periwinkle bends in the mighty wind,
but never breaks.
Periwinkle is gleaming bright,
like stars in the dark night.

Mr Ajay Mehta

spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani

Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani

Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
D

Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D

magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
D

Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
D

Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani

spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
D

Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
D

Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
D

Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing