
Purple
By:
Age:
Avery Li
11
Purple is the unique shade of sympathetic kindness.
Purple is blooming with compassion.
Purple is the bright shade gleaming with hope.
Purple is the pale tone like being kissed by sweetness.
Purple is the softness of being wrapped in the blanket of love.
Purple is like gliding on glaciers
with the pleasant feeling of the wind.
Purple is a friendship waiting to sprout.
Purple is the enchanting blossom of an irreplaceable feeling.

Mr Ajay Mehta

spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani

Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani

Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
D

Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D

magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
D

Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
D

Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani

spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
D

Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
D

Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
D

Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
D

Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing