Red Bird
By:
Age:
Paxton Dillon
11
This poem shows a cute story in nature that can brighten up young children's day.
As I look up, something red zooms by me like a jet plane.
I try to keep my eye on it, yet it is so swift.
I saw it land in a tree extremely close to me.
After what felt like one hundred years,
I got to the tree the figure landed in.
I creep closer to the tree and see a bird,
a beautiful rose colored bird sitting in a nest.
Then I see three bubblegum colored baby birds
hop out of the nest screaming with hunger.
Then the rose bird pulls out three worms
and feeds each baby.
They all stopped,
huddled together,
and fell asleep.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing