Rise Up
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
Keep going no matter what.
When the weight of the world
Bears heavy on your soul
And you feel like giving up
And letting go of all control
Remember that within you
Lies a power pure and strong
A spirit that can conquer
Any struggle, pain, or wrong
So rise up, dear one, rise up
And let your light shine bright
For you are capable of greatness
And your potential has no height
With every step you take
And every breath you breathe
You move closer to your purpose
And the life you long to lead
So when the road is long
And the journey seems too tough
Remember that you're capable
And that you're enough
For you are here for a reason
And your life has purpose true
So rise up, dear one, rise up
And let your light shine through.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.