The Bright Blue Ocean
By:
Age:
Gwyneth McLoughlin
12
Gwyneth's poem is one of hope and dreams, using the ocean as a metaphor for growing up. It communicates how nature can guide you to find yourself when you feel lost.
She roars in the shade of a tall, bright moon
Her waves roll cold and steep
She floods across the vast unknown
And sinks into the deep
The hulls of shipwrecks once blown
On the ocean floor, they meet
She lends her heart to those who roam
And sings her song to me
The ocean is a gate to your future
She loves you to your core
A mother taking care of her children
So that they have so much more
A world waiting to be discovered
Longing hearts want to explore
She knows treasures await you
The golden sun shines on the shore
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing