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The Bright Blue Ocean

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Gwyneth McLoughlin

12

Gwyneth's poem is one of hope and dreams, using the ocean as a metaphor for growing up. It communicates how nature can guide you to find yourself when you feel lost.

She roars in the shade of a tall, bright moon
Her waves roll cold and steep
She floods across the vast unknown
And sinks into the deep
The hulls of shipwrecks once blown
On the ocean floor, they meet
She lends her heart to those who roam
And sings her song to me
The ocean is a gate to your future
She loves you to your core
A mother taking care of her children
So that they have so much more
A world waiting to be discovered
Longing hearts want to explore
She knows treasures await you
The golden sun shines on the shore

average rating is 3 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

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Olivia

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

The Bright Blue Ocean

Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.

Alcantar Family

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

My Friends Make Me Happy

Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!

Alcantar Family

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

Love

The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”

Josean Jarvis

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

Fantastic Spring Fruits

I like how the writer describes the fruit.

Josean Jarvis

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

Fantastic Spring Fruits

what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.

John Brown

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

My Friends Make Me Happy

This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!

Lewis Roberts

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Grateful for Life

Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.

John Brown

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My Friends Make Me Happy

This poem made

Kamilah Brown

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

Love

This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!

Lewis Roberts

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

My Friends Make Me Happy

It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.

Lewis Roberts

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

Fantastic Spring Fruits

It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.

Valerie

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

The Gift of the Ocean

This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.

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