The Gift of Life
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This poem shows you to be grateful for your life, your family, your friends, everybody.
The Gift of Life is what was given to you when you were born.
You were given breath, life and form.
You were given your wonderful family, that raised you till now.
You were given your amazing friends, that cared for you.
You see the flourishing plants and flowers all around you.
You see the vast sky up above you.
You see the life that surrounds you.
You see the sound of the ocean waves that crash on shore.
You were given The Gift of Life.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing