The Gingerbread Man
By:
Age:
Paxton Dillon
11
This poem can brighten up anyone's day and bring a smile to their face.
Okay, I'll start. This is the gingerbread man.
I truly smell incredible
Yeah yeah, I'm really crazy.
I know I’m in a pickle,
But really I'm fast as a pixel.
I almost dash out the door
But first, I fell in a drawer.
Luckily, I made my way Out.
Hit a dog's snout very soon
Tripped on a pie
only after I Told a big lie.
And then There was a big chase.
I was feeling a big disgrace.
As I led people over to the Mud hole
I fortunately Tripped in a puddle.
They kept Going still unknowing
that I was behind.
And then, I took a kick to the behind
From something Blind.
Met a nice fox that had very bad chicken pox.
Maybe I have wet socks
But that doesn't mean that I need to get beaten..
Because I am the Super, fantastic Gingerbread man,
Who doesn't want to get eaten.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing