The Gingerbread Man
By:
Age:
Paxton Dillon
11
This poem can brighten up anyone's day and bring a smile to their face.
Okay, I'll start. This is the gingerbread man.
I truly smell incredible
Yeah yeah, I'm really crazy.
I know I’m in a pickle,
But really I'm fast as a pixel.
I almost dash out the door
But first, I fell in a drawer.
Luckily, I made my way Out.
Hit a dog's snout very soon
Tripped on a pie
only after I Told a big lie.
And then There was a big chase.
I was feeling a big disgrace.
As I led people over to the Mud hole
I fortunately Tripped in a puddle.
They kept Going still unknowing
that I was behind.
And then, I took a kick to the behind
From something Blind.
Met a nice fox that had very bad chicken pox.
Maybe I have wet socks
But that doesn't mean that I need to get beaten..
Because I am the Super, fantastic Gingerbread man,
Who doesn't want to get eaten.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.