The Lock of Friendship
By:
Age:
Avery Li
11
This poem is about how important a friend is.
A friend helps when you're in need,
and asks if you’re okay.
A friend is kind and always will be.
A friend doesn’t hurt, nor do they mock you.
A friend is never mean.
A friendship lasts an eternity.
It blossoms each day like a blooming flower.
A friendship is the greatest gift.
I know I can be a mindful friend, too.
I can help my friend by being kind, and considerate.
I can be kind and show gratitude.
A friend is the sweetest candy,
A friend is like a glimmering sun.
A friend is brave, bound, and bold and will stand up for you.
A great friendship is as bonded as the tightest lock.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing