Your Loved Self
By:
Age:
Hayden Malloy
11
It will help the kids that don't feel loved and or that are stressed. I chose the topic because I just want everyone to know they are loved.
Your Loved Self
By Hayden Malloy
Your heart is as powerful as the sun's radiant light
Your straight hair is like the silkiest and smoothest sweater
Your singing is as charming as a Mockingjay
Your bright heart is as loving as a mama bird
You are so loving and have a heart made of gold
You are as pretty as a bright sunflower
Your warming hugs are like a cozy summer breeze
Your eyes fill me with joy
Always know you are loved
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing