Your Loved Self
By:
Age:
Hayden Malloy
11
It will help the kids that don't feel loved and or that are stressed. I chose the topic because I just want everyone to know they are loved.
Your Loved Self
By Hayden Malloy
Your heart is as powerful as the sun's radiant light
Your straight hair is like the silkiest and smoothest sweater
Your singing is as charming as a Mockingjay
Your bright heart is as loving as a mama bird
You are so loving and have a heart made of gold
You are as pretty as a bright sunflower
Your warming hugs are like a cozy summer breeze
Your eyes fill me with joy
Always know you are loved
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.